高考英语写作必考八大书信体之感谢信

高考英语写作必考八大书信体之感谢信

高考英语写作必考八大书信体之感谢信

文/东方优播高中英语
孙玮


高考英语作文分数占比试卷高,攻克了作文,高分在望,新东方东方优播高中英语资深教师孙玮老师表示英语作文拿高分是有诀窍的,以下东方优播孙玮老师先对高考英语写作技巧进行提炼分享,再根据各省市模拟考作文范本进行真题演练,以帮助同学们全面掌握高考英语作文高分技巧。

【作文精讲】

文体:书信体感谢信

明确了书信的格式和类型,接下来我们分析一下这篇文章的内容。对于审题没有问题的考生来说,这是第二道门槛。首先,书信分为三段。

第一段核心内容:表示感谢。必须包括:(1)简单陈述事件原委(Tricia给予房间帮助);(2)表示感谢。这是重点内容,不可缺少,否则丢失要点分数。在这个基础之上,需要考虑的是如何将十分感谢这句话写漂亮。

第二段核心内容:回顾英国留学体会并赞赏对方给予的帮助。这一部分是考查学生细节填充能力的部分,文章提示只给出- 回顾英国留学体会这样简单的几个字。具体内容,例如留学经历,心情如何等,都需要进行适当补充细节。

第三段核心内容:表达愿望并附寄两张照片。必须包括:(1)再次表示感谢;(2)表达回报愿望。

格式,内容基本确定之后,需要考生下功夫的地方就是语言,首先广大考生应当尽可能的保证自己的作文零语法错误,如果基础不够扎实,尽可能多的用简单句表达即可。如果基础比较扎实,可以适度的加入复杂句,例如从句,非谓语,倒装等等,可以作为作文的亮点争取加分。

以下是东方优播孙玮老师利用真题进行演练。

【真题演练】

2016年河北省张家口市英语二模模考卷作文》

假定你是李华,暑假你参加了英国游学活动,住在房东Tricia家中,回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢,要点如下:


1. 安全抵家;
    2. 回顾英国游学体会;
    3. 感谢房东的帮助;
    4. 附寄两张合影;
    5. 表达愿望。
注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 结束语已为你写好。
【官方范文】
Dear Tricia,

I’ve come back home safely. Looking back to my stay in Britain,I left so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly peopleimpressed me a lot. I also benefited a lot from learning together with localstudents. More importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me tohave a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there. SoI’m so grateful to you.

By the way, attached to the letter are two photo takenwith you, which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together.

You are expected to come to China soon.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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2014年高考英语模考卷作文》


假设你叫李华,现是武汉大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示,给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信,表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。词数100左右。
提示:
    1.对英语李老师教学的评价。
    2.回顾在校时你的心情。
    3.对老师的理解和祝愿。

信的开头已经写好,但不计入总词数。

【官方范文】
Dear Mr. Li,
    I’m veryexcited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a freshman of WuhanUniversity, which I have been dreaming about. Mr Li, I still remember the dayswhen you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because ofyour creative work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, toomuch homework and the high expectations made me depressed. I was tired of thewarning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go tocollege. Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized mydream. And now I really understand you. I wish more and more of your studentscould go to their ideal colleges. Are you still so busy? How I miss you!
    Hoping to hearfrom you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua


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你们一家人在度假期间,由你的朋友Cathy帮忙照看你的狗狗smart。回来之后,你要写一封信来感谢一下你的朋友。词数100词左右。

【官方范文】
Dear Cathy,


I am writing to express ourheartfelt thanks for taking good care of smart while we were on holiday. He wassuch a happy dog when we got home; we knew he must have had lots of lovingattention. When we used to pick up from the kennel he would whimper and carryon for hours.


You not only saved us some money, you also spared us the worry of how hewas doing while we were away. Your kind help is very much appreciated, not onlyby smart, but also by our whole family as well.

Yourstruly,

Dell


以上就是东方优播孙玮老师通过真题演练的方式帮助同学们更好掌握高考英语作文写作方法,以帮助同学们提高英语写作能力。